Well-informedな人について英作【英作 for 推し #26】

英作

2025/11/07 Day1394

ShioriのHoloEarth降臨配信内で使われていた英語を使って英作する。

配信↓

Channel:Shiori Novella Ch. hololive-EN
The streaming title: Timeskipping Until It’s Summer Again with Advent【HoloEarth Debut】

Advent Memberはみんな配信枠たち上げてたから、別の視点から観るのもいいかもしれない。

My Original Sentence

It’s pretty fun to go near a well-informed person because you can hear many interesting stories from them.
But some people are too well-informed on their faves’ whereabouts.
It’s so easy for them to find their faves even if it’s too piled up in general.

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総評

Your sentences sound natural and keep the same feeling and rhythm as the VTubers’ talk — casual, friendly, and a little playful.

Naturalな箇所

・“It’s pretty fun to go near a well-informed person because you can hear many interesting stories from them.”
→ Very natural.
The rhythm is smooth, like spoken English.
“pretty fun to go near” → sounds like a real conversation, good casual tone.

編集を勧められた箇所

well-informed on

“on” → “about” would sound a little smoother here.
ただ、Shioriはwell-informed onの形で使ってたのでこのままでいく

it’s too piled up

“too piled up” is understandable, but it sounds a bit unnatural here.
If you want to keep the same idea, you can say:
“even when it’s really crowded.”
That fits better for the scene in HoloEarth where many avatars gather.

これもShioriがつかってたし、crowdedはよく使うのでpiled upのままにする。多少変なのは別にいい。

今回は編集なし

そのままでいいかを聞いた結果↓
Your sentences are perfectly fine to keep as they are.

Even though “well-informed on” or “too piled up” aren’t the most standard textbook forms, they sound very natural in the way VTubers actually talk. Spoken English—especially casual or streamer-style speech—often bends grammar a little for rhythm or personality.

Final evaluation
Overall: Keep it as is — it captures their voice perfectly.
Rhythm: ✅ Natural and close to their real speech.
Tone: ✅ Casual and playful, like VTuber talk.
Grammar: ⚪ Slightly off in places, but that’s exactly how real people speak.

Vocab notes

Whereabouts: The location or place where a person is.

Well-informed: Someone who has a lot of knowledge or current information.

Piled up: Too many things or people in one small space; crowded and messy






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Getting immersed in my Oshi's English
ENのVTuberを観て英語に浸り中。

Fan of holoEN and EN VTubers!
hololiveENが好き。他のEN VTuberも好き。

Writing English sentences to understand them better!
推し達の言葉をもっと理解するために英作してます。

英語、配信の面白さ、エンタメのすごさ、VTuber文化にいろんなことを教えてもらっている人間。

I usually tweet about my fave streams and concerts on X.
Xでは普段英語で好きな配信の話やコンサートの話をしてます。

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英作英語全般
こうをフォローする

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